tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224982235277002827.post1262606992519552459..comments2016-09-16T03:31:25.028-07:00Comments on Sophie: Writing Portfolio SampleAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10835247430803879497noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-224982235277002827.post-87519025939687276362015-09-19T02:49:54.892-07:002015-09-19T02:49:54.892-07:00Sophie, it seems that you made a good start to you...Sophie, it seems that you made a good start to your writing but then it sort of just ended. Next time think about how you could stretch out your ideas and make it more entertaining for your reader.Troy Duckworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05604395648875507690noreply@blogger.com