Wednesday, 18 June 2014

Writers Notebook

WALT: Collect ideas and experiences

Description: We had to make a page in our writers notebook about what makes you angry. It was really fun.

Evaluation: I think I could work on making the clouds more BLOD.

FeedBack: WOW Sophie :P I think you did a great job :) I think you did a really good job at adding texture and colour. I like how you added a man farting. I think you could improve on adding a bit Bold on the clouds -Zara

1 comment:

  1. Wow Sophie majority of what is on your "What Angers Me" list says is what angers me. I really like how you have added clouds around your clear bold letters.

    Great Work Sophie!

    By Grace C :D :)