Description: We had to make a page in our writers notebook about what makes you angry. It was really fun.
Evaluation: I think I could work on making the clouds more BLOD.
FeedBack: WOW Sophie :P I think you did a great job :) I think you did a really good job at adding texture and colour. I like how you added a man farting. I think you could improve on adding a bit Bold on the clouds -Zara